28-11-2020, 01:32 PM
A super story. It reminds me of "modifying" narratives at school for comprehension lessons. The class had to work out what had been altered; did it fit the context - and could it possibly be true? Naturally, some points were easy to work out (the red herrings) other rather more subtle. I was always amazed when of the more perceptive students managed to get most of them right. "We're used to it, sir," said one cheeky little devil. "We know how your mind works." Yours would have fooled even the best.